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Camp half-blood- demigod rp
by HPFan september 2013
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February 2014
(Can you please put quotation marks around dialogue?)
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"Why?" Leo asked. He had a feeling that he knew the answer, but he asked anyway. He had several questions he wanted to ask. How did her cabin catch on fire? Was she in there when it happened? What was Percy doing in there? Was he trying to save her?
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"Everything's gonna be fine." Leo said. "I promise."
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(Yes, if you put quotation marks around dialogue.)
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"Hey, things happen for a reason." Leo said.
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"Percy died trying to save her. You know what that means?" Leo asked.
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"She died with someone who cared that much about her. She died knowing there was someone willing to die for her." Leo said.
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Leo stormed away suddenly, without saying anything.
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(Well, she was, but nobody does her anymore.)
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Annabeth walked into her cabin and locked the door. Percy was gone
Forever. She would never see him again. Why did Percy run into the burning cabin, anyway? She asked herself.
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February 2014
(I don't know what you mean by 'redo')
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(Oh, okay. Go ahead.)
Annabeth broke down crying. She couldn't help it. She missed Percy already.
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Chiron carried the two lifeless bodies away.
Annabeth continued to cry. She didn't want Percy to die, but it was too late.
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