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by J61103 june 2018

Rosellia
178nd
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July 2018
(Can I make the lead huntress? And, if its not too confusing, can she have the same name and appearance as Amber?)

Skiz nodded at Twilight and looked from Aura to Castor. He was hoping one of them would give him permission to leave.

When Obsidian realized that some of the wolves were looking at him, he sat up straight. He was trying to strike a handsome pose. He liked it when wolves noticed his coat, which he thought was quite gorgeous.
He broke out of his stance and lovingly nudged his mother back. "I wasn't THAT scared," he replied. He really wasn't. He was just very confused.
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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(I thought Esmeralda was the lead huntress?)
BunnyMaster
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“Alright then, sweetie,” Twilight smiled. “Guess nothing terrifies my brave son.” She gently stroked their fur.
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July 2018
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(can I join? ⊙w⊙)
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Name : Phoenix
Age : 4
Gender : male
Appearance : smoke grey coat, sky blue eyes, all four paws are white, the tip of his tail is white and one of his ears has black on the tip
Personality : Honest, kind, generous, hard headed and funny
Ranking : (Alpha, Beta, Pack Member, Pup) Beta Male (if there is already one I'll change it) though he is particularly fond of hunting
Other : (anything you would like to add, family members, skills, etc.) He has a half sister, Valhalla. They share the same father but not the same mother. Both of his parents are dead as well. He treats Valhalla as his own litter mate, because he was the only pup to survive out of his.
Spira
52nd
2 020 points
July 2018
“I wasn’t scared either!” Eclipse piped up, shoving past her brother, eager to show how brave she was as well. She puffed out her dark pelt, raising her snout in the air proudly.

Kira snarled in frustration as Briggan broke away from the patrol. “Fur-brain!” She hissed, chasing after him and Maple. Maple’s tailtip bobbed a few feet ahead of her, before disappearing with a flick. Skidding to a stop, Kira turned to see Briggan and Maple hunched over something. “What were you thinking? You’re supposed to-“ her scolding broke off short as she shouldered past the two wolves. On the ground, surrounded by scarlet-stained snow, lay a rust-colored wolf. His sides moved in short, shallow breaths. This wolf didn’t have much time. “Maple, grab his haunches. I’ll get his front. Briggan, crouch down. You’ll have to carry him.” She snapped into leadership immediately, finding no time for pleasantries. “Gently, now. Up!” She shouldered herself underneath the wolf’s front, tilting him upwards enough to roll onto Briggan’s back.

Sparrow paced around Aspen. “I was thinking by that patch of old birch trees. I could’ve sworn I saw hoof prints the other day. If we’re lucky, they still might be there.” He wagged his tail excitedly. Bringing home a caribou would be great for the pack! And it might help show his loyalty.
AwkwrdIncarnate
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July 2018
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(Ive been thinking; it could be a little less confusing sometimes if we put the names of the characters ours are interacting with next to their names, and maybe even the actions they are performing. Just to save a bit of time and brain power ^^ )
|Sanguine|Romulus|

"I'm doing fine, flea-brain!" She snarled at him. Then, she snapped her jaws shut, her teeth clacking together. "I-" She cut herself off, looked at her paws, and at her own matted fur. Once, it was sleek and beautiful, but now, her ribs showed through, and a couple patches of fur were missing. Her fierce golden eyes were the only thing that had retained their beauty.
"I haven't really had anything to eat in a long time.. and none of the company I have been in has been very patient with me, to say the least." New scars showed up and down her body, but most of them were hidden by matted red fur. "I'm sorry." She choked out, with great difficulty, mind you.

She raised her head, though, trying to maintain her pride. But she remembered how sleek, how muscled she once was and noticed her current state. She needed a pack again. She thrived with others, even if she fought tooth and claw and was a bit... opinionated at some times. She peered into Romulus' eyes for a moment, and for a fraction of a second, hers were totally soft, calm. There really was a different Sanguine in her, but right now she couldn't show it. She was Mayhem. She couldn't just let her guard down. But, she needed to eat, or else she'd freeze to death in the snow on an empty stomach. Romulus was her best bet at surviving right now. She couldn't screw that up.

|Maple |Rust Colored Wolf |Briggan |Kira

Maple snapped into action, doing as Kira asked her and slidding her snout and then her neck and shoulders underneath the rust colored wolf's haunches, raising him up as Kira did. A couple of drops of blood hit her snout as she did, and she scrunched her nose up from the strong, pungent smell. "You've got this, Briggan." She re-assured him, her bright blue eyes meeting his own.

|Night| Kira|

Night followed, then noticed the wolf laying on the ground. "Kira, permission to run ahead and go tell Castor we're bringing back a visitor?" He said, his muscles ready to bound back to the Beta and tell him the news.

|Aspen| Sparrow|

"Alright, lead the way, you big bundle of energy." Aspen chuckled. He lumbered along behind him, steady, but never passing the young wolf. He recalled something his mother said to him when he was younger- "Aspen, you have the soul of an elder." But, shortly after that, she started talking about how lazy he was, and how he didn't even deserve a bite to eat because of his slothfulness, how great of a mother she was for caring for such a worthless pup. It made him think back to how Maple was praised so much, how Night and him were the outcasts. Night, first of all, for being a pup from a different father, and Aspen, of course, for being 'slow, slothful, and a horrible learner.'. His thoughts were interrupted when he tripped over a tree stump and fell onto the snow with a grunt. Quickly, he scrambled back up and continued on, a little dis-discombobulated, but he kept moving.


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July 2018
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Bump)
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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(I agree, it’ll let people know whether they’re supposed to post or not)

Maple| Rust colored wolf| Kira |Briggan

Briggan turned, surprised to see more wolves turning up. He followed Kira’s command and crouched low near the wolf, trying not to think of his blood-stained coat. Slowly but surely, they began to make their way back.

Twilight | Obsidian | Eclipse

Twilight grinned at Eclipse. “Both of you are brave,” She said. “Now, do you want to play or train? It’ll be simple exercises today.”

(I forgot to mention that Twilight trains her pups everyday but let’s them play at least once per day too)
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July 2018
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(Hey, do you want to include Val on the training part?)
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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(It doesn’t really make sense, I would say if I really had Eclipse and Obsidian to have a trainer then it would be at least 3 years old. Val is still a pup, and if I had to choose I’d say Phoenix instead. But in this case Twilight trains her own pups (as you can tell from her personallity and background).
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July 2018
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(Ok. Gotcha)
Rosellia
178nd
1 011 points
July 2018
(Sorry, I'm rather confused. Who is Esmerelda? I faintly remember her but I couldn't find her form.)
Twilight|Obsidian|Eclipse
Obsidian, in response to Eclipse's push, playfully tackled her. Before he lost the upper hand, he quickly replied, "I'm ready to train today. I wanna be super strong like those male wolves." He started to gently gnaw on Eclipse's ear, still on top of her.
Spira
52nd
2 020 points
July 2018
Kira/Night/Briggan/Maple/Injured Wolf

Kira gave a curt nod to Night. "Yes, quickly, now. We'll be following. Briggan, try not to jostle him too much." She flanked Briggan as they walked, making sure the wolf stayed on.

Eclipse/Obsidian/Twilight

Eclipse yelped as Obsidian pounced on her. She growled lowly, trying to wiggle out from underneath him. "I want to train, too! I'm going to be the best fighter in the pack." She tugged her ear away from her brother, turning to playfully snap at his muzzle.

Sparrow/Aspen

Sparrow trotted ahead, his ears pricked. He scented the air, searching for a scent trail. A faint muskiness reached him, and he perked up. Could it be the caribou from the other day? His thoughts were interrupted by something falling behind him. Turning his head, he saw Aspen getting back to his paws, covered in snow. Sparrow stifled a snort of amusement, turning back to the scent lead. "I think I smell a herd.." he reported over his shoulder. "Uhm..this way.." he padded in that direction.

(Sorry this was a bit rushed)
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July 2018
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(Ok so in this instance, wouldn't all the pups, Val included, be hidden from the new wolf?)
Rosellia
178nd
1 011 points
July 2018
Twilight|Obsidian|Eclipse
Obsidian batted at his sister’s mouth with is paw. However, this caused him to lose balance, and he toppled off. He rolled a little before he recovered. He shook his coat. “Not if I’M the best fighter,” he said, lunging at Eclipse.
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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Rosellia (Sorry, I'm rather confused. Who is Esmerelda? I faintly remember her but I couldn't find her form.)
Twilight|Obsidian|Eclipse
Obsidian, in response to Eclipse's push, playfully tackled her. Before he lost the upper hand, he quickly replied, "I'm ready to train today. I wanna be super strong like those male wolves." He started to gently gnaw on Eclipse's ear, still on top of her.

(Esmeralda is just a made up character without a form. It’s just a name for one of the prized hunters and will just be used as a... name, I guess.)
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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Twilight | Obsidian | Eclipse

Twilight couldn’t stop grinning at the sight of her two pups play-fighting. “Alright, Alright, both of you come with me,” She said, batting at Obsidian’s face to stop him in time before he pounced on his sister again. She led the way out of the den, making sure they followed.
(Speaking of Eclipse, there was an Eclipse today and a Mars conjunction or something like that.)

Briggan | Kira | Maple | Night | Red wolf (I guess we’re using lots of different names for this wolf)

Briggan rolled his eyes. Of course he wouldn’t jostle the injured wolf too much. He was aware sometimes when he walked his back would be uneven (I don’t know how to describe that), but this time he concentrated on trying his best not to move his back too much. Which meant he would move slower. But wasn’t jostling the wolf a bit still better than nothing? It would surely keep the wolf awake, Briggan thought. So he picked up his pace but still didn’t jostle the wolf too much.
Rosellia
178nd
1 011 points
July 2018
Twilight | Obsidian | Eclipse
Obsidian once again shook his coat before bolting off behind his mother. "I'll also be the fastest," he told Eclipse.
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July 2018
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Spira
52nd
2 020 points
July 2018
Twilight/Obsidian/Eclipse

Eclipse scoffed, flicking her ear at Obsidian. “You wish!” She sprinted behind him, catching up. As she ran, she realized the haunches of Twilight were suddenly very close. She dug her paws in the ground, skating to a stop just before crashing into her mother. She breathed a sigh of relief.
BunnyMaster
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July 2018
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Twilight | Obsidian | Eclipse

Twilight felt a tingling feeling near her tail. Chills ran down her spine and she turned around — only to find that it was Eclipse. Breathing a sigh of relief, Twilight turned to her pups, “Alright Obsidian, I want you to find a stick. Eclipse, you’ll go first once he comes back.”
BunnyMaster
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(And I’ll be leaving for a while, check my profile!)
Rosellia
178nd
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July 2018
Twilight | Obsidian | Eclipse
Obsidian jumped up a gear to full speed right as Eclipse began to slow down. He, too, dug his paws into the ground, rolling over once before lightly hitting his sister. He immediately sprang up and looked to Twilight for instructions. So he needed to find a stick, eh? That shouldn't be too hard, considering how many trees and shrubbery there was in the forest. He began to wonder what kind of activity they would be doing with a stick as he ran off towards the nearest bush.
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July 2018
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Val laughed as she saw the two pups fighting. It was good to have some liveliness around again. Val yawned before laying her head back down again, laughing again when she saw Obsidian run into the bushes.
J61103
148nd
1 125 points
August 2018
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a stranger (can I join? ⊙w⊙)

Sure you can 🙂 )
J61103
148nd
1 125 points
August 2018
((Hey guys, so I know you had a few questions that I didn't have a chance to answer, so if I miss anything let me know. First of all, Alpha Female would have her mate be the Alpha Male. We don't have an Alpha Male, so Amethyst can just be single. Whoever she picks her mate to be will be the Alpha Male, if that makes sense. Secondly, Esmeralda is just a made up wolf I came up with, she was a prized hunter. But luckily for you I had used her to say that she was one of the dead victims, so the lead huntress role is open. As for the Amber name thing, I'm a little confused on what you mean, I'm sorry! Do you mind elaborating more? Phoenix is accepted, except Castor is already the Beta Male, which is why he is making all these rules and acts like a hotshot. His son, Briggan, is next in line to be Beta after him since so far Briggan is his only son. @Julia Carter, I can make a plot for Val if you want since you have no one to role play with currently. It's just rather hard to role play with a pup when everyone else has older wolves, you know?. I normally suggest making older characters at the start of a role play, but its good you made Phoenix as a second character.))

Castor | Val Valhalla (beautiful name, by the way, and beautiful meaning)

Castor watched Twilight train her pups in the open snow. The smile on his snout was clearly evident, an expression of happiness and contentedness. He remembered Briggan as clear as day at that age, and the memory made him feel sick. Sick in a sad way; he missed him at that young, and knew he had no other pups to look after now that Briggan was older. He was an only child, and after Castor's mate moved on to someone new, he was a lonely father. Briggan was all he had, and although sometimes it felt like enough, it would be nice if he had someone by his side as well. Besides, Briggan was getting older, and wouldn't need his father for long....Anyways, it wasn't like many wolves saw this aching side of Castor. He was the strong Beta; no need for feelings. The only wolves who maybe saw this side of him, other than perhaps Briggan, was Twilight this evening and Skiz (if they had even paid attention and noticed). The best thing for Castor was to ignore this feeling; penetrate it, isolate it, block it from bothering him. It was one of the reasons he threw himself completely into his rank.

"Valhalla," Castor called, noticing the older pup smiling at Twilight like how he was. "It's nice watching the family, isn't it?" He started the conversation. "I sympathize for Twilight though. I know what it is like to loose a mate, I do. It's hard being a single parent." The charcoal wolf sat down next to the pup, standing stiff. Maybe instead of making small it he should start what he really wanted to ask, he suddenly thought. And there he was again, throwing himself into his work as opposed to listing out his feelings.

"How would you feel about being trained, trained for a real rank? You seem very responsible for your age...and I think you would be better off training for a real rank now. You don't fool around like a puppy, and you take interest in older wolves' affairs, as you did in Twilight's den. Maybe it is time for you to move up into the ranks, huh?" Castor looked at Val seriously, eyeing her up and down. Perhaps she wasn't ready...maybe she should still have the freedom to be a pup. Or, maybe not...maybe she was ready. Making the decision, Castor put his foot down.

"What do you say? Would you like to specialise in hunting, or fighting?"
J61103
148nd
1 125 points
August 2018
Romulus | Sanguine

'What happen to you?', Was the first thing that popped in Romulus's head. For another wolf to rake their skanky yellow nails on Sanguine's once prized fur was not only disheartening but a little frightening, as well, because what wolf would purposefully cross her? Only a dumb one, or perhaps a very skilled one. But more so than Sanguine?...they must be a rough one to battle. The gouges were deep, something Romulus barely noticed before. How could someone even do this? For a second he could have swore he saw something different in Sanguine. But maybe not. Wolves can't change that fast, can they? Either way, Romulus saw she needed his help and honestly, he needed hers. With a huff, Romulus walked past her, brushing her coat as he went with his thick mane. Even though he was also less than twice the size he once was, his overly furry coat remained fluffy, just more dingy now. "This way," Romulus said after a moment, "I smelled some caribou this way."


((We should have Romulus and Sanguine run into Aspen and Sparrow))

Briggan | Kira | Night | Maple | Red Wolf

"Aah," the wolf moaned gently on top of Briggan. He wasn't expecting these wolves to help him at all. In fact, he expected them to just finish him off. What were they to do to him? He was already dying, to help him would most likely be fruitless. However, the red wolf did notice something about his body; before, bleeding out in the snow, he felt numb. On Briggan he felt the pain, shooting fiery pangs all over. Maybe this meant, if he was feeling something, he could recover? "Ow," another sharp grunt rattled his body on top of Briggan. Were they almost there?
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August 2018
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|Castor| Val|
Val took a moment before she could answer. She was watching the family because she herself lost hers at such a young age, so she naturally had to grow up and mature quickly. Her fur bristled slightly before calling back down and assessing the older wolf.
"Not really sure. I really wouldn't know what I would be good at, because no one would take me out and train. I wouldn't have the slightest idea at which to choose."
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