Konnichiwa!

My username is pronounced SHOO-shin. I love to write poems and draw<3 I hope to be an author for my career and I am looking for people's feedback to help me.

one of my poems

A wing, slowly turning red,

bathed in blood,

The darkness, taking over,

a tainted wing, a clear cut,

blood stains, a scarlet liquid,

A fallen angel.

I apologize if anyone dislikes it but I would love to hear feedback from anyone, and if you want, I can type up more. But please be kind to me <3

for those who are uncomfortable with that poem, please ignore it and read this one.

the flowers, slowly spread around the garden,

each and every one unique,

delicate colors, sprouting forth from the petals,

a young lady, within the garden,

her skirt, as colorful as the flowers,

but something about her, is a secret,

a secret, that will soon be unlocked

Arigatou gozaimasu <3

Info

Gender: Female

Status: Single

Age: between 12 and 14, middle school

Hobbies: Drawing, archery, piano, flute and writing

Likes: KAWAII STUFF, Pokémon, Tigers/Pandas, Anime/Manga, nightcore, ALL ANIMALS, REPTILES OR INSECTS and Chinese food(for people looking for anime/manga, message me and I could recommend)

Dislikes: Justin Beboar(refuse to have complete name), animal abuse and bullying

Favorite Anime: Rurouni Kenshin, Vampire Knight, Full Moon Wo Sagashite, Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne, Fruits Basket, Kamichama Karin, Kodocha, Shugo Chara and Special A (All can be found on http://www.gogoanime.com/free-anime-list)

Favorite Manga: Bloody Kiss, Fall In Love Like A Comic, Faster Than A Kiss, Full Moon Wo Sagashite, Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne, Sakura Hime Kaden, Shinshi Doumei Cross, Time Stranger Kyoko and Watashi Ni XX Shinasai (All can be found on http://www.mangahere.com/mangalist/)

Looks Like: Long black hair, fairly tanned, Brown eyes, glasses

Pets: dog, Cat

Favorite colors: OBVIOUSLY red, Black, Green, & Blue

Friends: Briebree, she's an AWESOME person, go to her page and like plz! Check out XxCaramelliexX, cristy and pokeman 65'pages. They're pretty awesome and click the like buttons on their pages!

the girl you just called fat? she's overdosing on diet pills. the girl you just called ugly she spends hours putting on makeup hoping someone will like her. see that man with the ugly scars, he fought for his country. the boy you just tripped, he's abused enough at home . the guy you made fun of for crying, his mother is dying. copy this on your page if your against bullying.